ah, classic story of two lovers and one of them falling for somebody else. y'know, i often get tired of these, but i look for the ones that are written about something that actually happened, because i may think to myself "its just another love poem", but each one of them has a whole different story and a whole new meaning to somebody else, which makes them that much better.
as for your breakup, just remember this. there are people living in Africa who have nothing, no food, water, clothes, healthcare, or a roof over their heads. you could be off much worse than just a bad breakup. im not saying its bad to feel things about breakups, but just remember that you're living in paradise, and you should get on with your life. im sure your a wonderful person, so it's his loss for leaving you. keep up the good work

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LostSoulForever's Prints

oh... we haven't broken up...we are still together just some things have come up at I guess this is the only real way I could get how I felt out instead of bottling it up inside. And he hasn't left me, just I am being a typical girlfriend and not liking how he basically oogles a girl while talking to me so yeah. Anyways thank you for the support.

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ah, i get it now. sorry, i make too many assumptions these days. and damn straight he shouldnt oogle a girl while talking to you! anyways, good job for turning to poetry to get out your feelings. those who i know who went through a lotta stuff that didnt turn to poetry went to drugs and cutting themselves. great choice

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LostSoulForever's Prints

It's alright and thank you for the support. I am sure I will be able to work things out with him once I get a chance to speak to him. I did at one very very very rough time think about turing to cutting and suicide, but I never did because I realized I had too much to lose if I did so I started writing poerty and I have ever since, though lately I have been slacking in my writing, but that's mainly due to writer's block >_< bleh I hate that stuff. But it looks like I am working properly again. thanks again!

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I am the immortal being that walks amoung you, yet goes unseen.
Don't get on my bad side...I tend to bite.....
"There is only one happiness in life, to love and be loved."George Sand
My hair is four colors and I only used one bottle of dye...

Uhhhhh? What'd I do?

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"Oh, I see. You've seen hell, and now you're afraid of going there. Well, go in the stall, say five hail Mary's, wipe your ass, and you and God can call it even." Policeman in Dawn of the Dead

dun worry about it, not your fault and you already know what happened.

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I am the immortal being that walks amoung you, yet goes unseen.
Don't get on my bad side...I tend to bite.....
"There is only one happiness in life, to love and be loved."George Sand
My hair is four colors and I only used one bottle of dye...